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Thursday 7 July 2016

Once there was a girl named Victoria. She was lying down and she was singing then Suddenly some bad guys threw a rope down and captured Victoria , Victoria tried kicking but it still didn't work then victoria said ohhh! Leave me alone! Would yah! Then the rope ripped and Victoria fell she went going down screaming!!!!!!!!!!!! Saying “ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!” And as she fell something humongous came down she said” oh!” My “cause “! it was a crowd of people yelling attacking me.As Victoria fell everyone was looking angry at me like she did anything wrong. Then Victoria fell asleep and Victoria woke up in middlemore hospital. Victoria woke up in a fright “ahhhhhh” then she heard an unusual voice saying “ kill her” then Victoria got a heart attack and Victoria said “kill who “ why” the doctors came to check on me but Victoria was lying on the floor ……………..

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